Friday, November 29, 2013

Creative Challenge #279







TheRing


The diamond was small
Exquisite, sufficient size;
He hesitated
 
Her eyes... moist and bright
Grew immense with wonderment
She basked in his love
 
Togetherness pledged
Their eternal flame of love
Undauntedly burned
(c)mr
 
 
Each verse 5~7~5
 

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12 comments:

  1. Captain JerryNovember 29, 2013 at 4:05 PM

    Kinda like a convoluted haiku. Good job; I'll just stick with prose, where I can flounder about at will.

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    1. UnknownDecember 1, 2013 at 8:41 AM

      I guess you could say it's a 3 verse haiku. My initial attempt was a haiku...just couldn't find the right words to tell the story in a mere 17syllables. TY, Cap. Jerry!

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  2. UnknownNovember 29, 2013 at 4:28 PM

    Beautiful!

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  3. MitchyLRNovember 30, 2013 at 3:17 AM

    A wonderful entry for CC this week :-))

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  4. Danette December 1, 2013 at 6:58 AM

    exquisite!

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  5. Dim LampDecember 1, 2013 at 3:35 PM

    Interesting take on the theme, well done.

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  6. Belita Isabel JaneiraDecember 1, 2013 at 5:54 PM

    Very romantic imagery... I love it!

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